Do u like this. I had a dream one night and i typed it. ITS NOT FROM TWILIGHT I WAS A DREA?

He holds me against his cold, strong, chest. My heart is beating so fast that he could hear it. He chuckles under his breath. His strong arm around my waist, holding me firmly against his body. I look up at his face and notice that he has been watching my every reaction. Waiting for me to react for the fact that I am in the arms of a Vampire. But I don't care I love him and even if he wants my blood I will make no difference. He whispers my name in the silence" Alex", I look up. " You know that i can't control my urge for your blood" '" And if I hurt you..." I stare at him with anger, not letting him finish, " You won't" , " I can see in your eyes, that you have the will and strength to refuse". He let me go, and walked a few steps away, the words I never thought he would say came out. " I love you, Alex" I froze in my place, he noticed and pulled me into his open arms. " I love you too" I said in a whisper. He took my face that was buried in his chest into his hand. He bend down and softly put his lips to mine. His cold lips moved smoothy with mine, but then he pulled away a slight smile on his face."That was nice"he whispered.. "Yeah it was" I responded with my cheeks a burning scarlet. He smiled " You look lovely when you blush like that". Even though his comment made them even Redder than before. He laught a me deeper reaction. "Your amazing"I whispered to low i couldn't even hear it. '" Why is that?" he ask in a curious voice." You always surprise me." "I have never met someone like you and i never felt this way". " How do you feel?" He asked " I'm in love with you, Alexander." I look down " I have been in love with you from the first time I saw you" He responded At that moment I forgot he was a Vampire. I escaped from his grasp turned to face him and jumped into his arms, he was as shock as I was when I put his face in my hands and pressed my lips to his. He kissed me back. We fell to the ground. We let go of each other and stared at the dark sky with thousands of stars. I looked at him and whispered in his ear " Promise love me for ever" he looked down at me his golden eyes burining into mine. " Never can't be possible for me" Tears filled my eyes, his eyes still on mine " Eternity is for how long I will love you" He smiled my favorite bright wide smile. and he sealed his promise with a kiss... Based on a dream.Do u like this. I had a dream one night and i typed it. ITS NOT FROM TWILIGHT I WAS A DREA?It's to sappy, a good read for teenage girls but try adding something more with all the sappy descriptions you could have used that text to create a setting and time period or new world all together Alex was abit to emotional and sappy he was like a copy of Edward and i don't even read twilight just seen the movie once and didn't like it but i will give the second movie a try. NOW onto the good stuff, you're writing style was very good i liked it allot, i feel you have some good potential and are very descriptive of giving the reader a feel on how the main characters convey their emotions and body language, now if you can add a place and setting and time period or new world all together all the while being just as descriptive of the characters world you just might have a novel there. Also Vampire's are cool but try to have your main heroine's love interest be abit of a bad boy or more wild and im sure you could get a following.Do u like this. I had a dream one night and i typed it. ITS NOT FROM TWILIGHT I WAS A DREA?
dude i hate twilight but your a good writer

but i hate twilight

A LOT!!!

u should write a book lol

yeah i hate twilightDo u like this. I had a dream one night and i typed it. ITS NOT FROM TWILIGHT I WAS A DREA?Sounds like you were dreaming that you were the girl in twilight. I've read twilight many times and basically everythig you said was word for word from the book give or take a few corny lines you may have added. However the lines you said aren't in a row like that. They are spread out throughout the book.Do u like this. I had a dream one night and i typed it. ITS NOT FROM TWILIGHT I WAS A DREA?
Twilight rip off!!!!! I like twilight way better sorry but that is almost exactly from the bookDo u like this. I had a dream one night and i typed it. ITS NOT FROM TWILIGHT I WAS A DREA?Ignore those people saying that this is from Twilight, this draws my attention and makes me want more, so to answer your question yes I like it.