I wrote this poem myself one night. Is it any good?

Tears ran down her cheeks

For tonight she had been broken

She was covered in mascara streaks

Because many words you left unspoken





For weeks she woke up crying

Did this mean anything to you?

Her heart was suddenly breaking

was there nothing you could do?





She looked at her reflection

And couldn鈥檛 recognize who looked back

All she could see was imperfection

Since you tuned her heart so black





She loves you more and more

After all you鈥檝e put her through

And so why do you ignore,

And pretend that its untrue?



She gave you her whole heart

And you didn鈥檛 even care

You tore it all apart

Did you know it could not repair?





She tries to stay so strong

But its harder than it looks

When everything she has is wrong

From her friends to her looks.





No one seems to look her way

And only at her pretty friends

She feels alone each and everyday

but she puts on a smile and pretends.





She pretends her life is as good as theirs

Like she鈥檚 completely over things with you

She covers up pain with what she wears

And acts like she has value.





But the truth is she is wrong

And its all because of you

She stayes up al night long

Crying because shes see through.I wrote this poem myself one night. Is it any good?Dear Poet,



A good attempt at a all to sad situation. Perhaps I might make a few suggestions.



S1L2 For her heart had been broken.

L4 Because many words were left unspoken.

S2L3 You knew her heart was breaking

L4 Yet there was nothing you would do.

S3L2 But did not...

S4L4 And pretend that it is untrue.

S5L4 Now it is beyond repair.

S6L4%26amp;5 But everything has gone wrong,

She has no friend, no good looks.

S7L2 Only eyes for her pretty friends.

S8L4 She feels she still has true value.

The last stanza needs a rewrite to help her through it all, so perhaps:- But the truth is she is strong

And it is with no thanks to you.

She knew it to be all wrong,

Now she can start life anew.



Just a thought my dear poet. You do not have to use it.



RobertI wrote this poem myself one night. Is it any good?this is amazing