Who is the one who remained faithful?

"Ever Constant" - octameter



Beautiful lover,

daughter of darkness,

take me into night,

dance with me in rain.

Answering no one,

in love and insane,

through hearts painted black

the truth is made plain.



One night in sorrow,

our travesty clear,

glad I lost the fight.

One chance to borrow

beauty without strain.

Kissing tomorrow,

I'm bought by your stain...

my lover, my Pain.Who is the one who remained faithful?When love is pain, the pain is exquisite, like this poem. An unfaithful but beautiful lover can cause this pain. Sorrow over one's own faithlessness, when one remains "in love and insane", can cause this pain as well. I love and admire the way you have of creating a story, a whole atmosphere, with words that are both lovely to hear and wrought within the confines of such a strict structure. Thank you.Who is the one who remained faithful?
thats a beautiful poem!Who is the one who remained faithful?Can you believe in the faithful are they really there. I love this piece it is very beautiful.. thanks for sharing your soul.Who is the one who remained faithful?
It was you all along. Don't worry, just like in the song, dreams really do come true.Who is the one who remained faithful?This is so beautifully written. Sometimes losing the fight is the only way to win the war. Who is the one who remained faithful?
As always ET.....beautiful
Aww is this a Selene and Pain poem? I likes it very appropriate for Halloween